Zinda to hum hain magar, zindagi ki ab bhi aas hai
Yoon to saanse chal hi rahi hain, bas ek wajah ki talash hai
Ghadi ke do kaanton ke beech, kho si gayi hai zindagi
Ek pal se doosre pal ke beech, bas ek khali pal ka abhas hai.........
Ek ichha thi, ek farz tha, zindagi ke dorahe pe
Na ichha ko chuna, na farz nibhaya, mera jiwan ek adhoora prayas haiEk pal se doosre pal ke beech, bas ek khali pal ka abhas hai.........
Ek wajood pane ko daudte the kabhi, parchhai tak ko kho baithe
Aaj jeet ke sahare bandhe hain magar, har ka fir bhi ehsaas hai
Zinda to hum hain magar, zindagi ki ab bhi aas hai.........
17 comments:
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unfathomable amazement!
hey!
just loved the lines...
I WANT THE FULL POEM!!!
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I too want the full poem
ya! I too want the fool poem.
(im the unfathomly amazed one)
@anon
thanxx, but y dont u disclose ur name..
:o
thanx everyone, ok i'll put the whole thing soon, if u guys can tolerate
well-2 thanks for putting down my current mind thoughts :)
frankly cudnt agree more with these lines @ the moment...seems u thinking for me :P
PS: thx 4 making it "Kon ??" but still u missed one space ;)
Telepathy, is it?
:D
o cmon Kon...now dont fight for spaces...let it be the way it is
You are too good at it,anyways meri diary padte rahna perhaps you'll know more about me via the posts I make than what I tell you myself:D
well mite just be telepathy or maybe the coincidence tht we both were in same state of mind :)
PS: arey yaar ek space to laga de yaar..theek hai minors ke baad laga dena :P
okk, posted the remainin part of the poem too
Well, that's an interstign poitn u raise gaurav...i think poetry can be humorous and light without being slapstick/limerick, though very often any non serious verse is not considerd respectable.
I wrote one a few days bak, satire on the Indian system , and another, a yr and a half back, (for a frnd of mine who wnated to win a self-composed(!!!) poetry writin competition, topic his choice) titled "Kash meri ek girlfriend hoti"..at least I found it funny the first read. Anyone interested in a read?
Good idea, waise it's something a lot of guys, esp in places like IITD, can identify with.
My frnd won the second position with that poem, and I've always rued the fact I can't ever ever recite it.
Title hi aisa hai!
:P
All right, here u go!
:D
seemed to me like sequel of akhiri ichha ... and confused state of mind
(same here !!)
yar bhav ismein kya confusion hai
ye to seedhi sadhi poem hai
:o
mujhe to kahin confusion nazar nahi ayi
strtfwd theme hai?
***now confused***
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