The lip is sealed
But the faint smile
And the lowering eyelids
Do give it all away.
Listen, if you have the ears to,
Hear in the clamour of the bangles
The secret behind the glow
The secret she doesnt say.
The spark that sits in her eye
Blushing and gleaming with dreams
The noise of the wind that
In her bouncing hair, does sway.
The fresh colour on her face
The vibrant spring in her step
Makes it all too obvious
It's not just any other day.
Feel the energy that emanates
Feel the positive vibes
Of her infectious exuberence
That'll make u exultant anyway.
She leaves, but her aura doesn't.
Her warmth stays back to haunt
Her unsaid words then lead you to believe
Everyone should fall in love, someday.
13 comments:
Everyone should fall in love, someday.
Absolutely. Those who don't really miss something.
@prad
ganda pj...seriously bahut ganda [:x]
[:P]
but, y is it not obvious? elaborate..
@mischievous prince
speaking of me?excuse me...wat is that supposed to mean..:P
waise i'm a self-confessed "unabashed" person, but wat is the "it" u referred to?
pata nahi..mujhe to koi adulation nahi mili, except for "some" ppl findin the haircut good...nt everyone is as meticulous as u nicky:P
aur "it" ki batein yahan na hi karein to better hai
and oozing "oomph"?when did i do that?
yoon sare-aam badnam na karo:P
Yap. Back to school. It is time for me to go back to school again.
Although nuthing has changed except that the person's view point has changed due to LOVE. pyar woh chasma hai jisase duniya haseen dhikhti hai.
.....this is wat i make out of this poem....
Yups Love is great thing. nice peom
Why is this poem written from the point of view of a love-struck man, and not a woman?
I'm coming from Amon's blog, and that coupled with this obvious need to role-play others, leads to the conclusion that you need some serious shrink work on you. :)
(All of the above is meant to be taken as a joke; I now tell everyone when I joke because my well-intentioned humour is often mistaken for sarcasm).
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@ voice
yeah, in a way u r right
@ shalabh
First of all,thanx for droppin by here..:)
Secondly, who dared take ur well-intentioned jokes as a serious sarcasm:o
Very bad, whoever did that is grossly mistaken, and is terribly wrong. Must be corrected. O:-)
Anyway, I quite agree with u hat I'm a really arbit person who needs a shrink workin on me. I desperately need one infact. Know someone who cd help me?
BTW, i hope u didnt mean it when u said u were scared of phoenix:D
BTW, this poem is written from the point of view of a neutral observor, abt a love-struck woman.
And prad, wah wah..achha tha
superb poem yaar....
But seriously....it never is soo obvious wen it comes to women...
:-(
Damn u gals!!
LOL
wah-2 nice poem !! :)
well was it about u !? ;)
@banner
naturally...i understand
@aberrant
If it were, girls wdn't be such a mystery...May the best observor win(the hand of his beloved):P
@Kon
why do u think it was abt me?:P
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