Na baras itna, ki baras jate hain Woh jo nahi barse hain kai barson se Bebas si barsaaton mein Barasti andheri raaton mein Waqt bhatak-sa gaya hai ashkon mein...
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Baraskar jo beeta hai bayan nahi kar sakte prayaschit kar nahi payenge bahut barson mein
Nothing on-topic, but just to inform you that I now know who you are! As in I've found out your name..*Evil laugh* I shall now stalk you and make your life hell!
Okay, sorry, I was just checking if Handa's suggestion to almost_useless in one of your previous posts was workable. Experiment successful. Quite the scientist, aren't I? :)
I dont believe u made that much of an effort!!! My name, and most details about me are ALL OVER this blog and the comments, ppl refer me by my real name a lot, so no big deal. And it;s obvious Handa's how-to-do methodology was workable, because that's how he reached my profile there. Anyway, I really ur appreciate ur effort miss scientist..now do em a favour..add me on orkut![:P]
Dont cry O dear, for, going, is the year, Those who haven't cried since years having tried, in the helpless rains the rainy dark night pains, crying, i have lost my time and making this stupid rhyme...
pls write gramatically correct poems I say, your poem may make sense to you in an abstract way (to you) but it doesn't to others...
chappat to u for ruinin the poem like that!!!!! theek hai nahi aye samajh to na sahi i write for myself!not for colorful keedas jinki har bat goes OHT!!!
vaise samajh to kuch aaya nahi !! par anyway one suggestion...u should have added a line of thanks to the prof in whoose class u rote this :D or maybe u can even gift this to him.....sir its coz of u ;)
Well, yeah, actually, I found you because someone mentioned your name in one of the comments. :) But if I added you, would you recognize me? Don't think so, babe. :) Nyways, don't wanna let go of my precious annonymity so quickly!
Now seriously Phoenix, I really understand and admire all that you've written on this blog and your previous one too, but this one's just gone over my head!! Explain!!!!
@ baki sab yar jo cheez samajh na aye woh normally crap hoti hai, deep nahi:P
anyway, meri intended interpretation ye hai..
obviously "baras" rather "ba" ka alliteration hai
it goes like...itna na baras, ki andheri bebas yadon se bahri barsaaton mein woh aansu bhi baras jate hain jo kai barson se nahi barse hain, jinme poet ka sense of time bhi kho gaya hai] barish ko dekhkar uski sentimenatl attachment pe ek bahut bura attempt hai obviously first "chapaat" pe pun hai, use barasna as in gussa karne mein bhi interprete kar sate hain then it becomes...well...i think ab obvious ho gaya hai kyon likh rahi hoon main!
I had to be out of the country when the most popular ad ever hit the tv, I had to be out of IIT when IITians hit the TV. Honestly, if they dont sell that soap after such publicity, they never will. Is there a link on the web where I can see the AD, just once.
and ofcourse,the poem is way beyond the limits of my feeble understanding. I will just read your secy sir if I want to read something wet. waise, IIT mein sab itne intelligent kyun hain? koi sudoku solver banaa detaa hai, koi poetry karta hai jo samajh nahin aati.. take it easy guys.
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Baraskar jo beeta hai bayan nahi kar sakte
prayaschit kar nahi payenge bahut barson mein
Nothing on-topic, but just to inform you that I now know who you are! As in I've found out your name..*Evil laugh* I shall now stalk you and make your life hell!
Okay, sorry, I was just checking if Handa's suggestion to almost_useless in one of your previous posts was workable. Experiment successful. Quite the scientist, aren't I? :)
good one dear ! the lec must be proud of u !
@jasmine
I dont believe u made that much of an effort!!! My name, and most details about me are ALL OVER this blog and the comments, ppl refer me by my real name a lot, so no big deal.
And it;s obvious Handa's how-to-do methodology was workable, because that's how he reached my profile there.
Anyway, I really ur appreciate ur effort miss scientist..now do em a favour..add me on orkut![:P]
let me translate this in english
Dont cry O dear,
for, going, is the year,
Those who haven't cried
since years having tried,
in the helpless rains
the rainy dark night pains,
crying, i have lost my time
and making this stupid rhyme...
pls write gramatically correct poems
I say, your poem may make sense to you in an abstract way (to you) but it doesn't to others...
chappat to u for ruinin the poem like that!!!!!
theek hai nahi aye samajh to na sahi
i write for myself!not for colorful keedas jinki har bat goes OHT!!!
i know some1 will silently agree with me!!!
sar ke upar se gaya....:d
just curious why it named "class notes"
coz i wrote this lecture mein, do min sponty, bahut bore ho rah thi yar
vaise samajh to kuch aaya nahi !! par anyway one suggestion...u should have added a line of thanks to the prof in whoose class u rote this :D
or maybe u can even gift this to him.....sir its coz of u ;)
Didn't know where to say it... but "Anjul's crap" sounds kinda weird way to link me... please theek kar le
Well, yeah, actually, I found you because someone mentioned your name in one of the comments. :) But if I added you, would you recognize me? Don't think so, babe. :) Nyways, don't wanna let go of my precious annonymity so quickly!
umm...ok...now that evryone is acceptin it...i also dint understand the poem!!
:-D
but sounds very "deep"...
;-)
Now seriously Phoenix, I really understand and admire all that you've written on this blog and your previous one too, but this one's just gone over my head!! Explain!!!!
@ anjul
ok
@jasmine
hmm..anonymity so precious!
@ baki sab
yar jo cheez samajh na aye woh normally crap hoti hai, deep nahi:P
anyway, meri intended interpretation ye hai..
obviously "baras" rather "ba" ka alliteration hai
it goes like...itna na baras, ki andheri bebas yadon se bahri barsaaton mein woh aansu bhi baras jate hain jo kai barson se nahi barse hain, jinme poet ka sense of time bhi kho gaya hai]
barish ko dekhkar uski sentimenatl attachment pe ek bahut bura attempt hai
obviously first "chapaat" pe pun hai, use barasna as in gussa karne mein bhi interprete kar sate hain
then it becomes...well...i think ab obvious ho gaya hai
kyon likh rahi hoon main!
sorry for the inconvenience
I had to be out of the country when the most popular ad ever hit the tv, I had to be out of IIT when IITians hit the TV. Honestly, if they dont sell that soap after such publicity, they never will. Is there a link on the web where I can see the AD, just once.
and ofcourse,the poem is way beyond the limits of my feeble understanding. I will just read your secy sir if I want to read something wet. waise, IIT mein sab itne intelligent kyun hain? koi sudoku solver banaa detaa hai, koi poetry karta hai jo samajh nahin aati.. take it easy guys.
Too much depth or too many words,either way went miles above me
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