Sunday, October 02, 2005

NO MORE

A pair of hands (and a world) shook
While two souls died, and fate itself trembled.
Destiny weeped at itself, yet no tears
fell from the stone-eyes, not a word mumbled.
"You weren't a coward, then why did you run?
..why did you choose to escape...alone?
Why did you break your promise and leave?"

Questions unquestioned, yet alive in the moan.
Words-two words- a little ink on paper.
That got spilled in a life and darkened it forever.
An apology! But for what and to whom?
There's no point saying sorry to the dead-never.
A face-a memory- floats in the hazy eye
Then begins to fade as the tearlets grow.
Panicking, the lip quivers, to stop, or atleast say bye
Still nothing's heard, but the echoing words-NO MORE...

20 comments:

Kaala Kavva said...

isse pehle skip kyu nahi likha!!!
mainay to pad leeeeeeee!!!!!!

and obviously... u no wat

RELAX :)

Kon ?? said...

arey yaar tu hamesha itne senti posts likhti hai ?
again is it related to some incident :o ? ya aise hi ?

Anonymous said...

You invite so much pity.

Kaala Kavva said...

taru invites pity
whenever she goes to kitty
taru is a pitying poet
and she duzznt even know it

night in shining armour said...

sad to know..souls can die??
btw...words are the worse way to communicate thoughts (though thats a different theory and i'll tell you sometime)

radiohead said...

hmmmm
hmmmm
hmmmmm

tears in eyes [mine not urs]
pain in heart [mine not urs ..]
why the hell did u wrote ur heart out ......

And plzzzzzzz i m stressing on it again ..... though i m new to U but atleast try my means .. and u might [ very exaggerated ] be happy ....

radiohead said...

FPS said boys shudnt cry cause they look UGLY doin tht

I say girls shudnt cry cause they r pathetic doin tht ...
they r a breaking DAM of tears ....

And i donno why but i wish u not to be pathetic .... so be a GOODY GOODY DOLL & keep smiling :)

@archie@ said...

twas fantabulous!!!
waise seriously saari poems itni senti kyon hoti hain??must be bout someone...isnt it??

Phoenix said...

@ze chapaater

i knw nothing..i'm ampad as u say it
and i donot go to kitty

@anon
do i? but i also shun that out. keep ur own for urself.

@banner
maien samjah diya na tumhe, ab aa gaya samajh.

@bachi
yeaqh u r right
but sometimes, majboori emin words se kam chalana padta hai

@anuj
one, wat r exactly ur means..samjhao
two, i always write like this. this is the only place i write my hrt out
tell me u like it or not
thats it!
three, i never cry. there arent any tears, anywhere.

@everyone
any probs with senti stuff?
i like wat i feel like.
for the remainin qs, i choose not to answer

@archie@ said...

well absolutely no problems there but no intentions to frustrate u as well....seems that was too personal...so chuck it there
!!!!

desperado said...

nice words

Phoenix said...

@shubhaam

naah not frustrated...but i'm like that
i write watever i feel like

@dhruv
thnx for droppin by.

desperado said...

yep got here through anuj
n will keep comin back if your "echoing words" are so beautiful

brilliant once again :)

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...
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Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

hey beautiful post!!!...is this inspired from real life?...I also believe in expressing...whether it is ecstasy or depression!!!;-)...wotever that is written mayb pathetic or wonderful but wot the hel!!!

@archie@ said...

agreed there!!!
but plzz don't misspell my name ..tis only single 'a'

Phoenix said...

@dhruv

thanx

@mysterygal

yeah, went thru ur blog..u write very well..much better than my crap!
and i agree, expression is a bful thing...

@shubham
sry:)

feignman said...

one word for you "copyright" :)

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