(An old one...Dug it out from a personal diary)
"Do not stand at my grave and weep.
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am in the thousand winds that blow.
i am in the diamond glint of snow.
I am in the smile upon your face.
I am in the happiness you embrace.
Do not stand at my grave and cry.
I am not there. I did not die!"
20 comments:
if U can be in my smile then why not in my tears...
Smile is good but tears are also not bad :P...
Hopefully U r dead..(u declared that officially yesterday)
~Voice
u hve improved with time.
wow...really beautiful poem!!!...awesome!!!
ah good good
ur seriously improving..
(and your poem make sense!!! amazing!)
beautiful stuff
various shades of u in last 3 posts
but im still waiting for tht funny "love guru" to be back ;)
but as u said Do write only what you feel like
it will surely be great
keep smiling
Nice..!
when r u dying?? do so fast and let peace rule this world !!
;) kidding...nice poem...gradually becoming addicted to this blog
Wow.Maybe my taste sucks , but I found this awesome.This is an "old" one.So you wrote it when you were a kid ? Keep writing.India needs another nobel laureate.
@All
sorry...but I didnt die.
Tried, then something made me decide against it.
This blog is still on.
for some more time.
@Voice
Why tears..I dont want you to have any tears.
but I'll live wherever u want.
@handa
If that mant to say my current poems are better than this one which is old, I dont care.
@mysterygal, mani, luke,karthik
thanx
@dhruvv
there're a lot more shades to me.
"love guru" should be back sometime this week.
thnx for reading.
@banner
sorry
is bar bataoongi nahi
@insane
soem addictions are good.
give me some time
just a little.
@abhinav
I'm flattered.
Yeah perhaps ur taste does suck then.
This one should be 4 yrs ols I guess. when I was 14 or smthng.
hmm nice lines.
Even if I cry on ur grave ... u will be there in the wind to dry them ..
And then u wud appear on my face as a smile ....
and i wud be happy .. cozz i knw ur always there around me .. in me!!
beautiful..
but personaly death is an end..so woudnt care what hapens aftr i die..
ya buddy am giving ur blog time..infact 1/2 of my time on net goes into it !! ;P..and yes some addictions are good :)
@anuj
Yes I'll always be around...if you want me to.
I'm reminded of an old poem u may have read it here .
Incarnations may cease to exist, but existence cannot....
...I'll be invisible but around!"
@anirudh
That's one perspective.
@insane
Oh my God I'm flattered...
seriously I'm
Thanxxx buddy!!!:)
A poem about death;
is usually rather grave.
But here the poet sayeth;
that in death we must be brave.
For death is not an ending;
it is immortality pending;
through the long days of life;
during much toil and strife.
It is death that sets us free;
and you have put it so well.
With you I heartily agree;
For the wise ne'er fear the knell.
A very excellent poem, I must say;
compliments to the poet, I do pay.
My vanity doesn't do me well
I had to do it in Doggerel.
Beautiful Writing Kiddo !!
U rock again.. !!
If this is ur old creation at 14, sorry to say u r not improved then !!
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U were BEST Then.. and u r BEST now !! [:)] !!
Thanx a lot pareshaan
u have really made my day
am really busy and stuck today, but this one cheered me up
Thanx a million dude:)
@spammy
Hey thanxxx:D
Tried, then something made me decide against it
???????????
did u really try ? and y?
That's a master piece for I am an infant in this writing world....Really words, though simple, but when put together mean so much...Fantastic writing
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