Saturday, November 12, 2005

The Last Remnants....

CONFESSIONS!

A dainty spark adorns my eye.
The colour doesn't even leave my face.
How come you haven't noticed yet
The demure smiles that my lips do grace?
I know you know, and I know you pretend
That you haven't a clue of the mysterious charisma
But even this knowledge is all the more cute
To the magic that fills every second of my present
With suspense and drama, romance and thrill
& to the hope of a future that I see on your face
I sure would have been dead, if looks could kill!
Springs live in my feet, monsoons in my eye
While you turn on the heat, I despair for autumn
But still you continue to play hard to get
To mock at my despair, naughtily, so often!
Ah! You sadist! You derive such pleasure
when you see me writhe in love and longing
But it's OK still, if that's what pleases you
If that's all I need to do to see you every morning.
In your outstretched hands and arms spread
In your tender gestures of affection and care
In your heartbeats loud enough for me to hear
In your faintly mumbled expressions of "I'll be there!"
In the touch of your hands and the blink of your eye
You say it, your way, what our lips quiver to voice
But the hearts have already heard the unsaid.
Like everything else I know this too-trust me, Mr. Wise!
That's why this smile, this joy doesn't leave me
That's how this magic has covered my world 'blue'
You may still choose too hide and to pretend
But today I accept - YES, I love you!

17 comments:

Raja said...

WOW!! Wonderful!!
I've to read it again n again

insane said...

Gr8!!too good...u r talented !! I love this one..

N David said...

Interesting!

radiohead said...

phew !! some strong feelings there .. nicely written .. and its abt love .. GOSH !! its on everyones mind :(

Rays Of Sun said...

Loved this line "I know you know, and I know you pretend"

Knwing and pretending is the worst kind of pain that love brings along with it..

Awesome feelings from the heart on the paper..err..screen...:) Bravo Honey!

shaurya vaani said...

i m impressed.vaise isse pehle bhi impressed tha.:))

Phoenix said...

thank you everyone...guess there isnt much more i can say

Azeem said...

"You may still choose too hide and to pretend
But today I accept - YES, I love you!"
gud one.

johney said...

It seems Eros was busy at your place. I hope he has some golden arrows left for us too. Or has he spent all of it on you?

Grease Lightning said...
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Anonymous said...

I love you too..(You know who this is..)

desperado said...

wow....love is in the air...n the phoenix is flyin....brilliant post

insane said...

when is the next post coming..am getting bored..;P

Anonymous said...

Brings a smile to the face.

:-)

Anonymous said...

Just to mention, the Anonymous I find has replied to this post is someone else, and seems like you know him/her.

I didn't feel like commenting to this one.

Now I am a registered anonymous!

Anonymous said...

@ .:A:.
Thanx

@reg anonymous
Yeah sure:)
waise I'd prefer if u choose some little alias for urself..then there cant be any confusion in a see of anonymouses!

Anonymous said...

Fantastic.....u r excellent writer...as somebody said....kiddo is the best!!!
i really wonder how ppl can write poems...marvellous...
the last line sounds like the song from Silsila....
"
Haan hame mohabbat hai....
Kyon duniya se dare hum .....
aaj sabko bata de....
something like that
"