ALL SHE WANTS, AND DOESN'T...
I don't want our shadows,
To walk beside,each other in the night;
I don't want the winds,
To bring along the beats, of your heart, to mine;
I don't want to hear words,
That say that u love me more than the world;
I don't want the world,
To look at me and say, I'm your girl;
I don't want your gifts,
Fake promises of forever, or hopes any more;
I don't want to be demanded,
To be desired, or to be adored.
I want our shadows
To disappear within, each other, and the night;
I want the winds
Never to be able to, flow between your heart and mine;
I want word to fail,
And your eyes to tell me, that I am your world;
I want noone else
To ever see me, and 'violate', for I am your girl;
I want your hand in mine
And I'd know it's forever, or I'd live no more;
I want to be possessed
To be absorbed, and to be owned.
19 comments:
hmmmm ?
dont u think u posted this at the wrong place ?
u shud have sent it to your guy :))))
btw is this original ? cool :)
too good !
Now that was something,kya tha yeh,jo bhi tha mast tha
Zindagi ki is kashmakash mein
Jiitne ki jaddojahat mein
Apni kabiliyat ki taak par
Is manzar ko paar kar
Kuchh aisa kar dikha
Ki is duniya ko jiit ja
Har mushkil ko chiir kar
Allah ko yuun majboor kar
ki woh bhi tujhse aa pooche
Ki ae bande teri raza kya hai.
Nothing relevant,par aaya dimaag mein to likh diya
good one..... who/what is the inspiration ?
I wonder if the poem is more impressive or the relation between the poem and the title - "Incessant Desires".
And why do I feel as if one could have written it exactly the other way around and meant almost the same thing.
wow!
well written..share the same thought(1st one) as anonymous..
I remember once you left a mess true love doesn't exist...people need to wake up...and i would like to pounce upon the opportunity to say you were correct it does not exist not of this kind
Kyon balike kyon ... why do people expect ny thing from nyone ..
Life is bitch ....
enuf said ;) :D
@Kon ??
watever!
@Genius, ritesh
thanx
@adarsh
thanx.
nthn particularly.
@vertigo
thank yu
achha likha hai apne bhi, but bahut irrelevant hai:P
@the Anoymous
Bull's eye. i wondered if anybody wd even care to think abt the title, and get the intention.
think, and i'm sure u';d know why i put it.
and then u'd either realise how pseudo words can be, or how false it is when we say, 'all i want is ur love...." crap.
there r so many wants.
if it'd have been written oppositely, it'd have lacked passion.
@insane
thanks, and read wat i just said above.
@hemanshu
thanx for droppin by. i'm glad i made u think anything
@hemu
thats the whole hidden point in the poem bacha.
it can be just another love poem, or it can show u bigger truths.
Ekdam mast !!
sahi leekha hai.. all feelings well captured !! :)))
desires sure are incessant..and sometimes futile..
nice post...shows the conflict that is inherent in all humans!
Hey....
Another gr8 one....
loved it...
:-)
wrwtwetwet
Well your desires are truly lovable,but are they really yours?
I also wanted to say that to me both ways are just as brilliant so its only you who can even differentiate between the two scenes
Oh! Very well said! The incessant desire of true and absolute love is, so much instilled in our soul that I just cannot stop admiring the fact. And in an astounding manner dear, you have put it down. Kudos.
wow..this is beautiful..
thanx
Post a Comment