Tumhi ne zakhm diya aur tumhi ne
Rokar sahara bhi maang liya
Jab mujhe mohabbat kaha to maan liya maine
Jab bewafa kaha, woh bhi man liya.
Muskuraye jo tum to maine bhi
Khud ko muskurana sikha liya.
Fir muskan ko dhoke ki hasi kaha tumne
Aur fir ek bar, mujhe rula diya.
Bharosa karo, ye kaha tha tumne
Maine khud ko vishwas dila liya.
Fir khud hi tumne us bharose ko toda
Aur mere ishwas ko jhutla diya.
Is par bhi tumne be-imani ka
Ilzaam lagay jab humpe.
Muskra kar humne bharose ki tarah
Un ilzaamon ko bhi apna liya.
Wajah nahi poochhi thi mohabbat ki maine
Nafrat ka bhi maine karan nahi poochha
Nafrat ko bhi tumhari inayat samajhke
Sile hothon ke peechhe chhupa liya.
Jin jhuki nazron ko kabhi chaha tha tumne
Aj unhi ko gunah ka saboot samjha.
'Gar safai dete to use be-adabi kehta.
Isliye adab se chuppi ko apna liya.
Mohabbat ke badle mohabbat to ki thi
Nafrat ke badle nafrat na kar sake
Isi gunah ke liye khuda se maut ke badle
Jeene ki sazaa ko maang liya.
Jin andheron ko tumne tohfe mein diya tha
Unhi mein ji to liye umra bhar
Jis din tumne humko bhulaya
Humne bhi khud ko bhula diya.
Zakhmon ki duhai dekar, tum roye bhi
Aur marham bhi paa gaye.
Besahara to hum the magar fir bhi
ashk ko pathhar zakhm ko nasoor bana liya.
Aj saza khatm hone pe sochti hoon yahi
Ki apne jiwan mein khud maine bas ek kaam kiya
Jis kshan chaha tha tumhe, usi pal
Apne jiwan ka adhikar tumhe tha diya.
12 comments:
Nice optimistic poem, though I don't identify with it, so cannot say much. It sounded nice, at least it complains, and complains about a person instead of love itself.
Oh yes, peaceful new template, like a sign of truce after that rebel of a black, is it? Specially liked the huge benzene network at the sides.
Well, thank you.
It's a tough poem to identiy with, inact I hope nobody does.
But i'm amused that you like the fact that it complains.
About the template, thanx again. Truce ka pata nahi, but colours of life have been changing lately.
plus that template was giving problems. Comments from my 'admirers' were gettin out o hand.
hmm..nice template....things brightning up wid the spring
beautiful lines as always
n here some lines by sahir ludhianvi
Pyaar par bas to nahin hai mera lekin phir bhi
Tu bataade main tujhe pyaar karun ya na karun
Tum mujhe bhool bhi jaao to ye haq hai tumko
Meri baat aur hai maine to mohabbat ki hai..
but one which i like d best is :
Zindagi Sirf Mohabbat Nahin Kuch Aur Bhi Hai
Zulf-o-Rukhsaar ki Jannat Nahi Kuch Aur Bhi Hai
Bhookh Aur Pyaas ki Maari Hui Is Duniya Mein
Ishq Hi Ek Haqeeqat Nahin Kuch Aur Bhi Hai.
brillinat piece once again
tumne apne jiwan ka adhikae jo kisi ko diya
aisa laga ki tumne apne jiwan mein andhkar bhar liya,
tum is tarah kho gaye ki apni khudi ko bhula diya,
apni husti hui husti ko kisi min dafn kar diya.
I liked the poem for the fact that it looks at love from a different perspectice the one which I am most ary of.
I also see there has been a revamp of sorts as far as th template goes. Its easier on th eye to read things which are not on black
well started reading...
but after 3-4 lines it was too much for me to read n understand :D
sorry.....aisa hi hoon main :)
vaise kuch acchi si high funda si lagi !! original ?
[desperado]
Nce fitting lines u quoted...thanx for the compliments. gad that u liked it.
[hemu]
thanx. i never knew u'dlike it. it's as far removed fro heavy metal as it possibly can be:))
[grease lightning]
Khud ko khokar sab kuch paane ko hi mohabbat kehte hain
Khud ke ghar ki unko kya zaroorat jo kisi ke dil mein rehte hain
[kon ??]
haan i know nt ur types hai:))
but obly original hai!
[suru]
napak duniya mein pak hai to bas yahi
ki kisi aur ki parchhai mein khona bhi achha lagta hai
khud ko dhoondne ki daud mein thak gaye hain itna
ki ab apne wajood ko kho dena bhi achha lagta hai
Thanx for isiting. who agve u th link? mujeh pata nahi tha mera blog padne ke liye log dukhi hote hain:))
i am suru's iitkgp frnd :)
yeh kavita mujhe bhi samajh me aa gayi. :)yo
:) good one.
[suru]
am glad to see u her anyway, thank you bhav!
i feel great to know that smbody like me can inspire smone to write. keep writing and keep coming here!
[bhav]
thanx, and copngratulations for understanding the poem!:P
Jeevan ka adhikar jo tha diya,
fir giley kee gunjaaish kahaa,
sop kar khud ko us ko,
ab bachi koi khwaahish kahaa.....
You're a wonderful writer. Really...
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