Monday, March 06, 2006

Never Let Me Go...

Words fail me each time I think
Why is it that I love you so?
Not everything can be 'said'in words
Not everything has a reason you know
I don't know how you do this to me
What is it that from your eyes does flow?
That intoxicates me, more each second
Takes over my senses, steady and slow.
Reality is relative; mine exists ''within us''.
If broken, outside, is nothing but a black hole.
There's just one thing I want-to die in your arms
One thing I beg you for-Never ever let me go!

14 comments:

Prasad Narulkar said...

oh my oh my....Someones in LOooooooooovvEEE!!!
;-)

Amazing poem...just loved it!!

Zyborg said...

Have not come across such a beautiful piece in long time :-) Well actually i don't read poetry, poetry sucks at time, seems to be too out of place in practical life. I read only prose. but once in a while when i come across something poetic, I cannot restrain myself and fall for the magic once again. all over again.

Keep posting the poetic you
take care

s1 said...

lucky guy!

shaurya vaani said...

well well well
cant believe this but aaj hi maine bhi almost same topic par post likhi.
nyways as always this post of urs rocks.

agar it is a reality to my best wishes :)

Ritesh said...

Lovely Lines! Spellbounding. Amazing..

zubin said...

Brilliant lines. Someone's probably going to rise in love soon. Amen. And Best wishes.

radiohead said...

nice lines .. and quite painful as well.

nothing helps in these matters .. neither sympathy nor empathy . SO I aint doin nething.

All i wish u is best of LUK ( its a big factor i tell u ) .

and whtver happens .. jst try to smile ( aint talkin abt d fake 1's ). .

desperado said...

passion sure is coming back into phoenix
keep it there and keep flying higher

and beautiful words on ur blog after a gap;)

vibhav said...

I could not find out if it was a happy poem or a sad poem. But it was good.

Samyak said...

loved last 2 lines !!
Is it really be necessary to b in love to know all these feelings?? [:O]

Anonymous said...

Cool poem!!! I liked the title a lot. The "....." at the end, in particular - sort of indicates that there is more left to say!!!

radiohead said...

I got somethng better to say ::

[i]Another day without your smile
Another day just passes by
But now i know how much it means
For you to stay right here with me
The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
But it hurts so bad i can't take it any longer

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you, sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you

A thousand miles between us now
It causes me to wonder how
Our love tonight remains so strong
It makes our risk right all along
The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
But it hurt so bad i can't take it any longer

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you, sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you [/i]

- WESTLIFE .

Guess thts how ur feeling.

Phoenix said...

thank you people....it seems far more people in this world can understand love than i ever thought :p

Thanx for the comments and the appreciation!

Raja said...

such impossibly beautiful! only you can write like this