In the dark
When the shadows blur
Within you and me
Within us and each other
When fingers are lost
In spaces between
When spaces are lost
In a surreal dream
When touch completes
A union of soul
When lightning strikes
And shivers the whole.
When lips quiver
And feet go numb
When eyes talk
And the world is dumb
When hearts refuse to beat
When breathe loudly talks
When arms hold life
And life simply stops
When everything is wet
Everybody is drenched
The thirst just grows on
More and more, unquenched
Swept off my feet
All over again I fall
All over again you catch me
And the full moon sees it all.
12 comments:
Someone should make this into a song or something....its a really nice poem.
romantic and divine...
Lovely poem!
Excellent Phoenix..too good !
hmmmm....
good one.
the moon stands still
assimilates all it sees
has stood there for centuries
and seen so many waves passing by
we see, but the reflection of moon
in the echoes of passing time
but this would be different I pray
this one would be unique
for once time will carry the tale
like the wisp of sea carried by air
to the parched earth that waits
time shall carry this tale
and moon shall bear the witness
of love that was beyond words
carry it to the ears of people
people who wait to believe........
as sweet as sugar cube in honey,
as sweet as comfy light of full moon,
your words are like kisses on my eyebrows,
your gaze is the the ultimate salvation,
what does eternity matter to me,
to loose the touch of your hands is the supereme seperation.
tere liye nahi hai, kisi ke liye bhi nahi, kyonki meri koi gfrnd nahi hai . .lol
lovely...i love it when the moon peeks in..
I need to read your poems so many times. Once, definitely, to try and understand (in vain, for) the meaning. Once to appreciate EACH word you choose. And then several times just for the pleasure of looking at a beautiful creation.
[vivek, anon, tapasya, chitra, priya, prat]
thanx!
[zyborg]\
Absolutely brilliant!!
Time will carry it in its womb forever
Silent yet alive, sturdy yet tender
They believe it or not, they hear it or not
My love shall remain, soft, alive, and slender
[anon2]
kisi ko suna dijiye..girlfrnd bhi mil jayegi itni pyari lines sun ke
[raja]
Well, meaning there is, but its not meant to be easily understood...if you can, great, if u cant, never mind...
as for the words, my dear ment, they just wroite themeselves!
but, thank you :)
(I wrote and deleted 17 times, at least :-p. was thinking of behaving like a real ment
but, decided not to make 'any' comments :p)
Best regards from NY!
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Keep up the good work
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