Jab kabhi lagta hai zindagi meri toot rahi hai kai tukdon mein
Jhalak bhar dekh leti hoon aas paas,
har tukda kisi aur zindagi mein milta hai
har tukda kisi aur zindagi mein milta hai
Jab kabhi gham badne lagta hai aankhon mein meri
Pee leti hoon kisi aur ke aansu,
mera har gham kisi aur ke chhote se gham mein milta hai
mera har gham kisi aur ke chhote se gham mein milta hai
Jab kabhi lab.z mere ghutne lagte hain sannaton ke shor mein
Sun ne ki koshish karti hoon,
har lab.z kisi aur ki ankahi kahani mein milta hai
har lab.z kisi aur ki ankahi kahani mein milta hai
Jab kabhi andhera bad jata hai zindagi mein meri
Roshni de deti hoon ek aur zindagi ko,
door se apna ghar bhi fir roshan sa dikhta hai
door se apna ghar bhi fir roshan sa dikhta hai
Jab kabhi ojhal sa ho jata hai wajood mera
Kisi aur ko vishwas sikha deti hoon,
mera aks kisi aur ke aaine mein dikhta hai
mera aks kisi aur ke aaine mein dikhta hai
(Pretty random and with little rhythm; don't murder me OK)
6 comments:
very nice yaar.. no one's gonna murder u [for this one, at least :)]
one suggestion though: split each couplet into 3-liners (at commas) and leave space after each triplet. wud look better.
Hey.. aapko itne dino se dhund rahi thi.. aur yaha mili hain.. :) :)
y have u shunned your previous blog?
But anyway, thankfully now again I can savour some of your shayari at this address :)
Beautifully expressed, as usual.
:)
[the introvert
Thanx. point taken.
[canary]
Ah it wasnt as if this blog was ever unreachable. just thqat it has a lot more than just poetry, but it's been her for quite a while now. anyway, nice to see u here :)
[tapasya]
Thanx..
very nice ... :)
Dhanya ho devi. Yaar this one is particularly good. And the best thing is that one can sing it. It makes a really good song.Good work.
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