We began to walk together without caring
about where the path did lead.
We walked eye-in-eye, hand-in-hand till
the path disappeared beneath the feet.
We were lost but still together to lend
an arm and shoulder if we stumbled.
Life was aimless, but we nevertheless stayed
good and happy, how I still wonder.
Every night we slept in the woods
you'd wake up to see if I was fine.
Every time a thorn bled your foot
Blood would flow out from eyes mine.
We kept searching for direction
in the maze, searching the way out
We looked around, fought, struggled
and we managed to emerge, but without.
At some point another pair of feet
started walking between ours adjacent.
And somehow that stranger took both of us
on paths different; his force was latent.
"Time" is an enigmatic person
I could never figure if he was friend or foe
But this time he managed to separate us
From each other, without letting us know
I want to retrace my footsteps
To go back to where and whatever I lost.
If to get rid of sorrows I must lose you
I'd stay in the forest; I can't bear the cost
But the question is would you come back
to me, retracing the paths of Time?
Would I ever get back the bliss of your love
Or is forever now, this solitary grief mine?
13 comments:
nice !
somehow my comment is ur last post was not published.. although i posted it twice and it is saying deleted by the author :P.
really nice! u r a born, natural writer, and i know u have heard this many times before.
(this time with no added flavours in the comment, coz u r high on suicidal instincts:P)
beautiful...
Muuaaahh!!
tho..."solitary grief" doesnt last long i hope...
Kyaa baat he...gettin mor n mor romantic post by post...
wats cookin???
;-)
LOVELY Poem!!simply beautiful and very well written..btw whtz goin on these dayz gal??sab senti posts likh rahi ho.. :D..
[voice]
I dont knwo why..maybe u posted at a time when i was experimenting with templates[:P]
[the introvert]
Dont be soo scared waise..chill hai
as long as it is not KANKy...
and dont flatter me unnecessarily =]
[aberrant]
Oh lots is cooking..:D
thanx wwaise
[sweet angel]
thank you madam
life kabhi senti kabhi mental to hoti hi rehti hai hehe
nice poem.
chill maar yaar! as soon as you put any of your problems into a poem it magnifies out of proportions... i dont know what's wrong but itni kya fite ho gayi?
[arpz]
Thanx!
[vivek]
:O :O
Gone crazy...the poem is entirely out of imagination. Nothing real/personal about it. Mujhe aisi koi problem nahi, aur ogi to yahan to nahi likhne wali..
Relax
" "Time" is an enigmatic person
I could never figure if he was friend or foe"
Really interesting idea there...
We kept searching for direction
in the maze, searching the way out
We looked around, fought, struggled
and we managed to emerge, but without.
Wonderful lines...
time the healer as well as the stealer !!
[siyaah]
Yes it is...an enigmatic question indeed...
time does so many things to our lives..its hard to love it or hate it
[tapasya]
:)
[ff]
Well put!
Time can make or break a person.
Keshi.
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