....because words are all I have.
I see you rising from the silhouettes in your mightAs the shadow that walks beside mine in the nightAnd then as I watch the shadows mergeThe emptiness of my embrace hurts
Beautiful.........
beautiful poetry-wise..don't know what else u meant. Over Head Taru.
ouch , the poem hurt
This is an everyone's poem you wrote.
Beautiful indeed.
[Zyborg, bellona]:)[The Introvert]Well, it wasn;t even supposed to mean anything for you. only for the person these lines were written for, perhaps.[Arpana]I know the pain.[V]Everyone? How?
not closing the quotes signified the emptiness...or i am just looking too much into itwords as always ...touching
ah..somebody noticed!
Well, I could somewhat understand it so I wrote everyone's poem.
Wonderful lines...the emptiness of my embrace...wow! How did you conjure this up?
[V]Pain is universal.[Tapasya]Well, sometimes you find the exact words for what you really feel.
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Beautiful.........
beautiful poetry-wise..
don't know what else u meant. Over Head Taru.
ouch , the poem hurt
This is an everyone's poem you wrote.
Beautiful indeed.
[Zyborg, bellona]
:)
[The Introvert]
Well, it wasn;t even supposed to mean anything for you. only for the person these lines were written for, perhaps.
[Arpana]
I know the pain.
[V]
Everyone? How?
not closing the quotes signified the emptiness...or i am just looking too much into it
words as always ...touching
ah..somebody noticed!
Well, I could somewhat understand it so I wrote everyone's poem.
Wonderful lines...the emptiness of my embrace...wow! How did you conjure this up?
[V]
Pain is universal.
[Tapasya]
Well, sometimes you find the exact words for what you really feel.
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