A few minutes past midnight, a young girl mad with passionate love and nearly choked with emotion stood in the light of a half moon that shone twice as bright as a full moon any other night, and looked into the pair of eyes dearest to her full of an infinite amout of deep, pure love and laced with the moisture of a sharp sadness. Staggered to her feet, for a while she didn't know if she was dead or alive, or if her heart that was literally in her mouth now was still beating, and then she saw those eyes turn and leave, walking back till they disappeared in the horizon and her heart returned to her chest, now with an additional lump that weighed on forever thereafter.
I was the single tear that single tear that dropped from her eye and inundated her soul with an emotion that was a mixture of immense joy and immense pain. I was the moment of time that stopped and was buried alive forever.
I was the single tear that single tear that dropped from her eye and inundated her soul with an emotion that was a mixture of immense joy and immense pain. I was the moment of time that stopped and was buried alive forever.
13 comments:
All well??
Take care lil girl!!
Hey long time!
All well yeah..just nostalgia and some words
deep.
**Staggered to her feet, for a while she didn't know if she was dead or alive,
thats how I feel right now.
Keshi.
if you are that tear who flowed down my cheek , you must know how I feel ... need I say more?
That's not a complete story, I hope I get to read a second part!
farewell always tends to have pain
.......i havent experienced a smiling farewell till now..there is always a feeling of sadness...but i wait to see n feel a "happy" farewell
[keshi]
come back to life dear...because life awaits you
[arpana]
I know dear, I know...
[V]
If it ever gets completed that it.
[desperado]
Why do u want a day when people want to desperately drive u out of smwhere n so farewell is all happy and relieving.? :P :P
Just kidding.
I got it! "She-he-and-me" writings are the safest bet! No one confuses "he/she" with "me" :P
well written..I like it
Brilliant/
[the introvert]
finally!
:P
[ff, cb]
Thanx!
what the hell was that?
Ah so you still read this blog!
Nice.
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