When it hurts really bad soundless become all screams The most familiar silence is the noise of shattering dreams The one who weeps the most has a tearless eye that gleams The most painful silence is the one that knows what it means.
Many a time when I think of commenting on your poetry, words fail me. They fail to match the intensity of your poem. After putting in a lot of effort to carve a good positive comment, I dump the idea altogether :)
Hmmmmmm LOvely lines... but what I beleive...people know about the silence very much...its more over.... no public interference..... when people are silent..... what do u think??
Silence is weird, sticky, fricative The tongue gets stuck in the roof of the mouth If you're all 'in there', you'll never know what's out So give up your silence; it's worth a shout!
[sunshine] Thanks a lot, for the visit and the comment. :)
[kanupriya] Beautifully quoted. And true to. There are somethings so delicate that using words to express them completely corrupts them. As if no form can ever do justice to their existence.
16 comments:
"tearless eye that gleams"
awesome.....just like a soundless scream........suffering without pain!!
cleverly put!!!
ouch!
thanks. meri subah waise hi kharaab jaa rahi thi. aapke ghee ke liye dhanyawaad :D
[rushme]
thanks. Suffering without pain, or with too much of it. Well...
[arpz]
Arey! Maine kaunsa apka mood kharab karne ke liye likha tha :(
Mat pada karo yar, apki khushi zyada imp hai. Apko kasht dene ka koi shauk nahi.
Many a time when I think of commenting on your poetry, words fail me. They fail to match the intensity of your poem. After putting in a lot of effort to carve a good positive comment, I dump the idea altogether :)
I'll take a quiet life
no alarms and no surprises
~radiohead
silence!!
take care ;)
bouncer ... :-??
Hmmmmmm
LOvely lines...
but what I beleive...people know about the silence very much...its more over.... no public interference..... when people are silent.....
what do u think??
[vik]
I'd give you a hint. When I'm intense, be subtle. And vice versa.
And you shall win.
[anuj]
But oh, I love surprises. ;)
[voice]
rofl :P :P
[chakoli]
silence is a very precious, treasured commodity, something whose ownership is fiercely fought upon. it means, just so much. :)
bahot sundar :-)
i know what you mean !! Lovely :-)
as Amrita Pritam says, "kai baatein aisi hoti hain, jinhe shabdon ki saza nahin deni chahiye!'
"The most familiar silence
is the noise of shattering dreams"
--indeed it is..wonderfully written..
Falling short of words...as usual. Just wanted to let you know that it touched me deeply.
Silence is weird, sticky, fricative
The tongue gets stuck in the roof of the mouth
If you're all 'in there', you'll never know what's out
So give up your silence; it's worth a shout!
;P
Cheer up!!!
[sunshine]
Thanks a lot, for the visit and the comment. :)
[kanupriya]
Beautifully quoted. And true to. There are somethings so delicate that using words to express them completely corrupts them. As if no form can ever do justice to their existence.
[azeem]
:)
well, thanks.
[tapasya]
I am glad, but I wonder what would make a mistress like you fall short of words.
[akshay]
lol
Yeah, sometimes a scream is very liberating. Fricative silence eh? Nice.
Very beautiful words
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