Humse woh pyar yoon kar na sake
Jaise humne pyar un par lutaya tha
Tum par woh aitbar hum na kar sake
Jo tumne humse pyar kar hum par dikhaya tha
Har dil mein chah hai kisi dil ki
Har dil ko chahne waala koi aur hi dil hai
Khuda ke khel khuda hi jaane
Ye dilon ka hisaab bahut hi mushkil hai
9 comments:
Guest post. Multiple authors. All confused.
"Har dil mein chah hai kisi dil ki
Har dil ko chahne waala koi aur hi dil hai
"
Good one
first time I found ur poem to be a lil arbit. It seems that flow was not there.
Anywayzzz aajkal aap k blog par activity thodi kam hai....
I see a cycle of affections forming out there .. would be fun if that cycle would complete
Btw, the difference in intensities hidden in the two words 'lutaya' and 'dikhaya' is interesting.
My sincerest apologies for the earlier remark......was insensitive and in poor taste......Tend to get carried away when in "crazy, wacky" company......
3 years on, and my reading of blogs is more sporadic and infrequent than ever.....My posting now only once a month.......but yours is one blog that continues to captivate my interest.....
Cheers.....and keep posting.....
U****N
i see 4 perspectives on a single topic.
[vik]
Yeah, true. Not mine, somebody else must have written it.
[Shantanu]
:)
[geetika]
Kinda low on blogosphere tyhese days...the lull will be followed by a storn when the sem begins :)
[divesh]
Complete cycle can happen only in a fiction!!
The difference is deliberate..everybody feels their own love greater than any. Their own suffering greater than any. that's the implicit difference.
[Um_brood]
It's ok. I understand, whackingess is contagious. Dont think it was ur idea anyway. :P
Take care, n have fun with new life.
[mostlybhu]
Just 4? :P
Damn! Fiction mein exist karta hai? And I had half written a story about such a cycle and was feeling proud at the originality of the idea. Please provide reference!! Or is it that you are talking about 2 cycles?
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