Sometimes all it needs
is for you to step aside
and watch life go by
without intrusion, or noise.
It's easy, except, the silence
often comes to stay
Reality is about prodding on
once the euphoria goes away.
It's hard to admire reality
the way we adore illusion
But in the face of a million imagined sorrows
Reality is a mere delusion
12 comments:
"It's easy, except, the silence
often comes to stay
Reality is about prodding on
once the euphoria goes away."
-Really profound lines, these ones.
very well thought of.. nicely structured!! :)
Unbelievable! We could be twin souls :-)
I must come here more often...
Brood
too good!! am in love with the lines, want to link it on my blog, I need ur permission, Please can I ?
-Anu
[vik]
Profound, well maybe, only if u think abt them...
[i me myself]
Mmm...thanks.
[brood mode]
Told you so!
[Anu]
Sure, go ahead, no problem.
I see reality being pushed to a side, while the emoticons had taken the center stage :)
Sometimes all it needs
is for you to step aside
and watch life go by
without intrusion....
This is surely the reality of life! Sometimes you are a mere spectator in life and sometimes this really works!
Finally all this comes down to your choice: blue pill or red pill
Difficult but nice poem :)
how many of us to this?
how many of us would step aside and just watch?
we all want to be in contorl[sic]
[Divesh]
Emotions are a part of reality, but emoticons? oh well...
[geetika]
Sometimes yes...and it's a good thing to do, hard to do for long..
[anand]
:) Easy choice?
[vibhav]
Easy to hai. at least padna easy hai ;)
[johney]
We cant be in control all the time...it's frustrating tiring and pointless.Need to let go sometimes..thats what is needed.
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