A moment of agony, then a sigh of relief
A whiff of doubt, then a breeze of belief
A seizure of fright, then a touch that calms
A sniff of plight, and then I run to your arms! :)
Being a kid is goooood.You're allowed to need love.
A whiff of doubt, then a breeze of belief
A seizure of fright, then a touch that calms
A sniff of plight, and then I run to your arms! :)
Being a kid is goooood.You're allowed to need love.
13 comments:
amazing,so natural, so alive, so real...thanx for writing this.
if only..
Jhooth hai. When I was a kid and I wanted to marry this girl, did they allow me? Baat karte ho! :( And, and she was above 18, phir bhi! :P
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The poem has innocence. Like kids. :)
SO true... and when you are BIG boy...love is to be distributed :))
Very simple and short but it has many dimensions like it can easily reflect the relation between a child and parents...
Amazing :)
And yeah... being a kid rocksssss....
[oceanic mirages]
:-) You should also thank my prof for being so terribly boring and useless that mind gets the luxury to drift to nice places in a daydream from where such lines are born.. :)
[pooja]
Thoda aur wish karo....
[vik]
Arey! You're allowed to need love, but not marriage! You could have gone to the babe and told her I love you and she'd have given u a cuddly wuddly cheek pinch and said...awww I love you too sweetheart {{Warning: Do not try in adulthood! }}
That is the good part....marriage is boring stuff only adults have a copyright on, n they keep it away from kids so children wdnt know what a big mistake it actually is, or theyd stop respecting the adults. It is a conspiracy.
[chakoli]
Yeps! pyaar do pyaar lo..... :P
[aditi]
:-)
[rohanjain]
:D
Being a kiddo rocks too :D :P
i think we all need someone ... with whom we can go ,when we feel in trouble ..... it can be ur parents,best friend ...or someone very special to u :)
richness of meaning and imagery captured with such conciseness!!
Beautiful BECAUSE it is so true...
LOVED it Ment :-)
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