There was a girl, once upon a time. She needed too much love, always a lot more than her rightful share. Not that she wanted to keep it all hidden somewhere for herself. She returned all she got, many times over. And she wanted to keep giving. But to give a ton, she wanted her ounce. She wanted many ounces over. She wanted simply too much. And all her life, she kept wandering, thirsty for love, simmering from the insides in the heat of her unshared locked up passions. She died with her thirst quenched eventually by a flood of her own salt-less tears. Her greed had stolen their salt and given it to the wounds of her heart, so the heightened pain would finally consume her and end her anguish.
5 comments:
omg what pain..what emotions and what a wonderful way of saying it all in such few lines..
Bless you
Rane
mere palleh kuch nai padi!
Wow! So well expressed yaar!
The line "But to give a ton, she wanted her ounce. She wanted many ounces over" ... so she could give back many a ton!
And "simmering from the insides in the heat of her unshared locked up passions"...
Can completely relate with this post! Amazingly expressed... hats off!
True love is always unconditional...
Waiting for part 2 to be written..:)
Lovely...Touchy...can be well related too...!!! Bless You!!
But for sure her expectations were beyond ounces!!
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