....because words are all I have.
"If only I could be a little more practical!"
beautifull!
[Raja]:D Absolutely. [saumya]:)
Very beautiful :)
dream and ubiquitous are not quite the opposites you know.. last line seems forced.
if only!?
good one.
you would just have some more "if only"s then.
[sumeet, anon 2]Thanks :)[Anon 1]Point taken :)My first choice was *If only you weren't just a fleeting presencebut my ubiquity...*but somehow, wanted to write dream[bhushan]umm..well[arpz]Cynic!
I wonder how much of life would be left if we take away the if-only and the it-was-meant-to-be moments.."somehow, wanted to write dream"I agree... "if only" ki baat ho aur dream ki baat na ho, aisa kaise ho sakta hai :)
@diveshso essentially, if-only to what-if :) a conundrum matched by another
Then you would've written this poem the other way around :D
Such a beautifully written poems, there is just no chance of sending you brickbats, thats for sure.
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"If only I could be a little more practical!"
beautifull!
[Raja]
:D Absolutely.
[saumya]
:)
Very beautiful :)
dream and ubiquitous are not quite the opposites you know.. last line seems forced.
if only!?
good one.
you would just have some more "if only"s then.
[sumeet, anon 2]
Thanks :)
[Anon 1]
Point taken :)
My first choice was
*If only you weren't just a fleeting presence
but my ubiquity...*
but somehow, wanted to write dream
[bhushan]
umm..well
[arpz]
Cynic!
I wonder how much of life would be left if we take away the if-only and the it-was-meant-to-be moments..
"somehow, wanted to write dream"
I agree... "if only" ki baat ho aur dream ki baat na ho, aisa kaise ho sakta hai :)
@divesh
so essentially, if-only to what-if :) a conundrum matched by another
Then you would've written this poem the other way around :D
Such a beautifully written poems, there is just no chance of sending you brickbats, thats for sure.
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