Yoon to tumhein bhool gaye hain hum
Kayi kayi mahine beet jate hain
bina tumhari yad ke
Par achanak kisi kisi raat
khud ko fir usi mod pe paate hain
Jahan tum bichhad gaye the
Aur fir wahi 'kyon' yaad aata hai
Fir wahi dard jaag jaata hai
Khud ko fir se solah ka paate hain
Kaaran dhoond dhoond khud ko samjhate hain
Fir wahi ladakpan yaad aata hai
Ab tak us dosti se naata hai
Kyon khoya ye jaane ne jaane kabhi
Kya khoya ye dil tumse behtar jaanta hai
7 comments:
mujhe lagta hai is poem se woh har koyi khud ko jod sakta hai, jisne khone ka dard mahsoos kiya hai..
It couldn't have been said simpler, yet painfully strong. Loved it!
aJ
very well written.. simple yet powerful... smthin i wrote smtym bck !!!
http://s3ntim3nts.blogspot.com/2011/03/blog-post.html
Yoon to tumhein bhool gaye hain hum
Kayi kayi mahine beet jate hain
bina tumhari yad ke
Par achanak kisi kisi raat
khud ko fir usi mod pe paate hain
tumhari 'smriti' ne smiritiyon ka bandh khol diya... bahut hi imandar koshish...
ज़िन्दगी के किसी रस्ते से
तुम इस मोड़ से गुजरो तो
ये कहेगा कि मैं यहाँ
बहुत देर रुका था
फ़िर ये सोच के चल दिया
कि कभी तुम इस मोड़ पे आओ
तो मुझे यहाँ बैठा देख
रास्ते का रोड़ा ना पाओ
Deep regrets and pain hidden somewhere in there...well said!
Poignantly beautiful!
Thanks for the words everyone. Added so much meaning to my attempt.
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