Has saans raah takti hai teri, ki hadd hai bekarari ki
Ye ghadi ki suiyaan bhi har ek kadam bad rahi hain sau- sau saal mein!
Dikh raha hai chehra bas ek hi har jagah, ki hadd hai meri khumari ki
Zindagi bhi ruk ruk ke rahi hai sarak, intezaar khatm hone ke intezaar mein!!
Ye ghadi ki suiyaan bhi har ek kadam bad rahi hain sau- sau saal mein!
Dikh raha hai chehra bas ek hi har jagah, ki hadd hai meri khumari ki
Zindagi bhi ruk ruk ke rahi hai sarak, intezaar khatm hone ke intezaar mein!!
15 comments:
hadd hoti hai yaar accha likhne ki ;)
chalo keep doin it
> Has saans raah takti hai teri, ki hadd hai bekarari ki
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaan agreed :)
>Ye ghadi ki suiyaan bhi har ek kadam bad rahi hain sau- sau saal mein!
nahi yaar time to ulta teji bhaage ja raha hai haat se :))
>Dikh raha hai chehra bas ek hi har jagah, ki hadd hai meri khumari ki
>Zindagi bhi ruk ruk ke rahi hai sarak, intezaar khatm hone ke intezaar mein!!
haan agreed again..bas samajh nahi aata yeh chehra hai kiska .... :)) , lolz....
vaise copy-paste hai ya original ;) jo bhi hai accha hai......
intezaar is all the fun :P but only after the goal is achieved:P.
kyunki
lamha lamha tarpa main is lamhe ke liye
yeh lamha bhi mila mujhe ek lamhe ke liye
kiddo bechari...
bekarari aur khumari ki maari... :P:P:P
what amazes me is how u manage to write abt love w/o bein in love urself!
It was really nice and mind you this coming from someone who runs as far away from hindi literature as possible.
The first image hat came to my mid though was the ticking of the minute hand on my wristwatch till its 11 and its time to submit the paper and leave the examination hall. I am sorry if you meant to convey sumthin else but this is what I understood.
Wah, mazaa aa gaya.
Khush-kismet ho tum intezaar mein jo ho,
kam se kam unke aane ki ek ummed to hai.
however, time went by
and the face is now no more seen
i wonder what happened to those times of wait...
what does all this mean?
waah waah . Kiddo :D
Isi baat pe ek sher arz hai, aap logon ki dua chahta hu: -
hamare maathe pe bal pad gaye aapka blog padke,
insaan se shayar ban gaye aapka blog padke,
dard aap me hai toh hum me bhi kam nahi hai fir bhi,
na haans sakte hai, na hi ro sake aapka blog padke.
good poem really...
"intezaar khatm hone ke intezaar mein"
wah wah
one more thing...write for youe own sake...so come back.
roses,
...
:) hmmm.. makes me think..
many many happy returns of the day.
What a PJ ;)
keep blogging
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