Where Me meets You
It's just a Mew, meek,
not a roar.
When Fate comes to Us
It's just a Fuss, futile,
it doesn't fuse.
When We go to Life
I don't become your wife
only, barely alive.
No together, no forever
There's no U, Me aur Hum
Only: you me and mayhem
The idea so ain't cool, dude
Just plain old school, dude
For you to get joy
Needs you to forget moi
We so don't work, hon
Except like dullards, no fun!
26 comments:
Hey....u write good as told u earlier also. But sadness deffinitely pinches.... Bring smiles & joy.
Take care
your Dard does Disco :), cool poetry, I esp like the way u mixed up hindi and english.
liked this poetry...satirical humor..:)
"When We go to Life
I don't become your wife
only, barely alive."
Good One!
wow Im impressed!
Keshi.
:-))))
nice one man once agian!!!
WOW!
[passionate]
Sadness...how does one excape that anyway....ever!
[maverick]
Oh it's totally Dard-e-Disco-esque random. No brainer..
[anu]
Thhnks..random humor, when u dont know how to 'handle' a grave situation.
[shantanu, keshi, chake, sachin]
hehe
Thank yousss :D
Wow! Such a sweet poetic rejection! Mar jaawaa.n.. :P
There can't be a more feel-good rejection (for the receiver), if it has to be that is. Banda kaafi der tak to poetry pe marvel karta rahega.. And I guess he won't have much against you after listening to such a logical reasoning. For such sweet and safe rejections, he might limit his pursuits to poets only :P
Killing me softly with her song..
Meethi chhuri se hua halaal.. chhora ganga kinare wala..
what fun! good good...Keep rejecting! Keep writing! :P
Kisi ka dil tode koi poetic andaaz mein to parvaah nahi.. takleef to tab hoti hai jab koi "ha ha ha" karta hai :D
waise, the "crap" is getting "refurnished" .. cool!!
Hey, thanks for stopping by at my blog. About the poem... hmm... well, some things appear a little like a forced laugh here. But I'm sure the message gets across :)
"When Fate comes to Us
It's just a Fuss, futile,
it doesn't fuse".
Undoubtedly true!
But "When We go to Life
I don't become your wife"
Yeh bindaas hai yaar ;)
And most of the guys need to understand this :D :P
kaatne ka achha tareeka hai...
baaki poem tere normal standards jitna achha nahi laga :(
[vik]
Wishful thinking but good one. Maine to kafi randomly likh di thi bina soche, but now that u point out kafi far reaching consequences possible hain... :D The poet community might even be thankful to me
[vibhav]
Sadist fun hai thoda sa, dont you think? :P
Meethi chhuri hi sahi, khoon to nikalta hai :(
[divesh]
Hehe, true. Magar ghatiya quality ka hi sahi, ek sadist sa humor to hai, isliye tag kar diya...
[sudipta]
Agree. Crappy poem yar...completely pointlessly likh di, but who cares :D
[geetika]
Ah, guys, they need to understand sooo many things :P mushkil lagta hai.. :D
[doc]
I know. Aiven hi likh diya, height of boredom...
reasons and logics...
:D :D
Yeah, where there isn't love, logic is bound to surface
Wonderful.. light and good humour... u r utilising the hols well with these cool posts and making us readers enjoy also:)
I like this :D
Very good and about time.
[aditi]
Thanks...I'm just doling out too much crap, with so much time on my hands!
[Kanu]
:D :D Feel free to use it! :P
[conufsed]
Not such a great timing though.
Your poems are artistically brilliant...only the thoughts hurt
The art is incidental, the thoughts, the hurt are all my echoes...all just mine.
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