Ek meetha ehsaas
Khud ke hone ka aabhaas
Pyar nahi,
par vishwas.
Khud ke liye nahi
kisi aur ke liye jeena
Madad nahi,
bas sath.
Lamba nahi
bas chhota sa jeewan
Lamba nahi
bas mehka sa saawan
Halki halki boondein
Thodi si meherbani
Zara si barish,
thoda sa paani.
Khud ke hone ka aabhaas
Pyar nahi,
par vishwas.
Khud ke liye nahi
kisi aur ke liye jeena
Madad nahi,
bas sath.
Lamba nahi
bas chhota sa jeewan
Lamba nahi
bas mehka sa saawan
Halki halki boondein
Thodi si meherbani
Zara si barish,
thoda sa paani.
16 comments:
thoda sa badal,
thoda sa paani,
aur ek kahaani.
Labeled as crap. Hmm.
kuch bhi...
thoda hai thode ki zaroorat hai.. dont know your thoughts made me thing of that song.. :)
Yeh toh hum sabki dilli tamanna hai ;)
This time the label is nt appropriate I think!!!!!
this poem was really very cute and good....it can surely make to some hindi movie song lyrics....great work... :-)
Lagta hai
shuru ho rahi hai
dheemi dheemi muskaraahat
.
.
Hindi in English! This time I imagined u wearing a salwaar kameez sitting on a rock by the sea and saying these lines
Envisager would've written it in a better way. Her kinda stuff.
Loved it.
To contribute a verse:
Tamanna nahi
bas aas.
Nice one.
padhkar achcha laga :)
jeevan nahi jeene ka ehsaas..
Amazing
loved these one especially...
Halki halki boondein
Thodi si meherbani
Zara si barish,
thoda sa paani.
u know I read it thrice...
tooo good:-))
Very very beautiful....love it...esp..Madad nahi,
bas sath.
[onion]
Thanks for reminding me about that beautiful song...
Crap it is.
[doc]
Absolutely.
[pallavi]
Ah..yes...beautiful song..
[geetika]
Shayad ho, but fir bhi stupid hai!
[almighty's guinea pig]
Naah, it has no rhtythm, meter or meaning...but then, there _Are_ so many hindi songs like that...so maybe... ;)
Bice nick, btw
[akshay]
:)
Weird hai but thanks for the imagination.
[vik]
mmmmm....her stuff was...more innocent, n certainly better than this crap.
[vibhav]
You love weird stuff. thanks though
[mostlybhu]
Dhanywad
[never mind]
Thanks..
[chakoli]
Thank you but seriously mujhe to bilkul achhi nahi lagi thi post.
[aditi]
:) Wahi chahiye hita hai...bas wahi.
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