One beautiful day, while he was waiting at the crossing...
His eyes stopped at her.
She was looking at him too.
Their eyes met briefly.
He tried to remove his gaze, to look elsewhere.
Still he felt her eyes upon him, fixed and staring.
He wanted to look again, but was afraid of finding her staring back.
It was time to move, he began ahead.
She turned behind him.
He moved forward.
She followed.
He moved forward.
She still followed.
He knew she was following, and tried to move faster.
She kept up.
He tried to escape, but she was still behind him.
He moved, she followed.
And this went on and on.
Until finally, he was forced to stop.
And give her a one-rupee coin.
His eyes stopped at her.
She was looking at him too.
Their eyes met briefly.
He tried to remove his gaze, to look elsewhere.
Still he felt her eyes upon him, fixed and staring.
He wanted to look again, but was afraid of finding her staring back.
It was time to move, he began ahead.
She turned behind him.
He moved forward.
She followed.
He moved forward.
She still followed.
He knew she was following, and tried to move faster.
She kept up.
He tried to escape, but she was still behind him.
He moved, she followed.
And this went on and on.
Until finally, he was forced to stop.
And give her a one-rupee coin.
19 comments:
a different theme after a long long time ( ... perhaps !)so, persistence pays after all.
PS - can i generalize the learning ;) ?
Only comment at this can be: wtf !!!!
Could relate! :P It's a little sad, liked it.
Kahani mein twist tha :P
I could guess the ending though...
but, a nice short piece!!
good one
nice piece :)
talent hai bhaiyya aap mein :)
Lovely, i am liking you small posts :)
Keep up to the expectations!!!
Agree with Vibhav. Could relate, Sad. :(
Arey masst! (* Clap Clap Clap *)
Sad?? I found it funny somehow, as in 'fun' funny, not the 'weird' funny...
LOL...:DD
Nice one :-)
I gues persistence pays!
[catalyst]
Risk at your own peril.
[kon]
Ah well, disappointed?
[vibhav]
Relate...hmm...sad? kyon?
[geetika]
Thoda sa neembu aur mirchi
[kunnu]
Nice :d
[burf]
Ty!
[zapper]
Ty.. :)
[passionate]
Thank yous. will try
[veikiin]
Aww :(
[akshay]
:)
Likha to funny hi tha
pata nahi log dukhi kyon ho gaye!
Thank you
[chakoli]
:)
[prude]
Wll...maybe :)
pittance of a peril..... till the last ray shimmers I persist at my own risk .....
and I do stand forewarned, grazie! ;)
Good luck then, comrade.
...for now that should do, molto grazie ;)
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